Post by wildface on Jul 22, 2009 20:26:10 GMT -8
Jetpaw's brother, Whitepaw was never found/ is not dead, so I was thinking maybe I could have him come into the clans also, but (dum dum duuuuunm...) Whitepaw is not going to join RiverClan, for some reason (maybe because he hates water/has fallen in love with a ThunderClan cat) he is going to be in ThunderClan, causing Jetpaw to question the Code and everything he believes in. Good,bad or maybe? I dunno if I would even be allowed to do this but, I'd like too...give me your thoughts 
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So here is the story of how Voleclaw and Whitepaw were captured by Twolegs, and I would add to it in Whitepaws Bio:
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So here is the story of how Voleclaw and Whitepaw were captured by Twolegs, and I would add to it in Whitepaws Bio:
Whitepaw's chest ached from running so fast, his heart pounding so loud the twolegs had to be able to hear it, next to him was a grey tabby tom. Voleclaw's eyes were wide with fear. They knew the twolegs were going to catch them, there was no escape, they were backed into an old foxhole. "When they grab me, run like you have a whole pack of dogs on your tail!" the tabby tom mewed to his son. "I'm not leaving you alone, besides the kit would catch me anyway." Whitepaw hissed quietly. The twolegs were right in front of them now, they pointed some sort of long, hollow stick at him and pulled a smaller stick that was attched to it. Somthing jabbed him in the side, hard. The last thing he saw was Voleclaw being hit with the same thing...
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Whitepaw awoke in a small twoleg cave, but it wasn't made of stone...it was made of some sort of shiny twoleg stuff. The stench of Kittypets and Fear-Scent was overpowering, but underneath all that he could smell Voleclaw. "Voleclaw, are you here?!?" the little white apprentice yowled as loud as he could "Shut up you little scrap!" an angry looking yellow tom hissed at him. "Whitepaw? I'm right above you,look up." Whitepaw looked up and saw the grey tom through the top of the twoleg cave. "Where are we?" he asked. "You my little friend, are in what is called a Pound. the yellow kittypet informed him. Voleclaw looked at the tom "A Pound?" he asked. " It's a fancy twoleg name for a place where they either give you away to some twolegs...or take you back to the Cutters... No cat ever comes back from the Cutter here..." the tom shuddered. Whitepaw looked at Voleclaw, getting ready to ask him a question when three twolegs and a twoleg kit came stomping in like a bunch of badgers. The kit ran over to Whitepaw's cage and was jumping up and down, yowling excitedly. It's parents muttered somthing to the third twoleg in the room, he nodded and walke over to Whitepaw's cage and opened it. The kit grabbed him and they shoved him into another twoleg cave, smaller this time. He saw the third twoleg grab Voleclaw and take him towards the room that the yellow tom had said was the Cutters. "Voleclaw,NO!" Whitepaw yowled and began to fight with every ounce of strength he had. The kit shook Whitepaw's cage and muttered somthing at him angerliy. "Whitepaw, don't worry, I'll get away, just go with those twolegs and escape as soon as you can, go find Reedfoot and Jetpaw, I'll be there waiting for you with them." the grey tabby meowed to Whitepaw soothingly. Whitepaw nodded and went with the twolegs, although he did balk at the Monster they took him away in, but they were heading toward his home... he would get away from these vile twolegs and go home... soon.
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Whitepaw awoke in a small twoleg cave, but it wasn't made of stone...it was made of some sort of shiny twoleg stuff. The stench of Kittypets and Fear-Scent was overpowering, but underneath all that he could smell Voleclaw. "Voleclaw, are you here?!?" the little white apprentice yowled as loud as he could "Shut up you little scrap!" an angry looking yellow tom hissed at him. "Whitepaw? I'm right above you,look up." Whitepaw looked up and saw the grey tom through the top of the twoleg cave. "Where are we?" he asked. "You my little friend, are in what is called a Pound. the yellow kittypet informed him. Voleclaw looked at the tom "A Pound?" he asked. " It's a fancy twoleg name for a place where they either give you away to some twolegs...or take you back to the Cutters... No cat ever comes back from the Cutter here..." the tom shuddered. Whitepaw looked at Voleclaw, getting ready to ask him a question when three twolegs and a twoleg kit came stomping in like a bunch of badgers. The kit ran over to Whitepaw's cage and was jumping up and down, yowling excitedly. It's parents muttered somthing to the third twoleg in the room, he nodded and walke over to Whitepaw's cage and opened it. The kit grabbed him and they shoved him into another twoleg cave, smaller this time. He saw the third twoleg grab Voleclaw and take him towards the room that the yellow tom had said was the Cutters. "Voleclaw,NO!" Whitepaw yowled and began to fight with every ounce of strength he had. The kit shook Whitepaw's cage and muttered somthing at him angerliy. "Whitepaw, don't worry, I'll get away, just go with those twolegs and escape as soon as you can, go find Reedfoot and Jetpaw, I'll be there waiting for you with them." the grey tabby meowed to Whitepaw soothingly. Whitepaw nodded and went with the twolegs, although he did balk at the Monster they took him away in, but they were heading toward his home... he would get away from these vile twolegs and go home... soon.
